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In destiny's den, I try to see the light.
In times of pain, I hold hatred in spite.
But within my soul, I'm lost in my early years,
and surprising to all, seen were the villainous tears.
I climbed to salvation; my heart never quit,
I learned my patience, but personality was split.
One of evil, with another of good,
this poison has trapped me; for tomorrow I must look.
A mask for my fears; a shield for me to hide,
never will I prevail, if I hold the rage inside.
Control I must take, and power I will gain,
and this might just save me; it might keep me sane.
An addictive behavior; I have begun to fight,
never again will I worry, of the days dying to night.
I will not run, this enemy I must face,
a formidable adversary; an outstanding pace.
But I cannot lose, for intensity was given,
no one can know, the battle I live in.
With my last of thoughts, with my efforts to cry,
to all, i must say, never will I die.
As every man laughs, and every man bleeds,
remember to pass this down, to the child that pleads!


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