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clouds on the horizon -
suddenly through the window
black crows and butterflies.


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The following comments are for "haiku (to johnb79)"
by inmost

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Loved this, I was going to write a haiku spin-off of that particular poem. You beat me to the punch. Well done!

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Did you like black crowes & butterflies?
Last year around this time I was having a very depressing time of it, and just when I was at my lowest I saw the most ironic thing.....butterflies appeared out of nowhere and filled my yard and just then there were a dozen crows filling the trees above my head. I watched for nearly an hour and tried to discifer this ironic appearance of two very different yet related winged creatures. I hope to write more intensely and rewrite the poem to include all that I just said.

( Posted by: johnb79 [Member] On: April 9, 2004 )

John, crows and butterflies
John, are you living next to my home?! I don't think so, as I'm living in Romania:) But...something similar was happening to me few days ago. Except I don't have a yard but a balcony. Well, it seems that all of us we have our crows and our butterflies in our lives.

Warm regards,
Eugenia

P.S. Please forgive my English language errors.

( Posted by: inmost [Member] On: April 9, 2004 )

what errors?
Your english is fine, don't worry. Mine is probably worse than yours, as I spelled crows/crowes. Weird how we all can relate, even halfway across the world. Good to know that there are others out there thinking the same thoughts, seeing the same things, and feeling the same way.

( Posted by: johnb79 [Member] On: April 9, 2004 )





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