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When I see you
I believe
And I am careless
And I fall..

Tears comes to my eyes
As I know the truth
The truth my dad told me
Of what pain and love is

I am happy that he told me
Or I don't think I would understand
It just feels so good to me
To for once be underhand

Because when I feel you
And your touch against me
I feel like we are one
One together..you and me

We come together
Melding like hearts
Coming as once
In the warmth of love

Because ..

When I see you
I believe
I am careless
and I fall

I fall...FALL IN LOVE!

*bass guitar and drums only*

I fall
Happily fall
Forever falling
In love with you

*only guitar now..acoustic guitar*

And the tears fall
Fall from my eyes
Fall through love
With me ...

*all together now..hehe*

...I keep on falling..
...
...
...
So happily..

------
Itachi: You lack power....do you know why?
Sasuke: W-why..?
Itachi: Because you lack it....hatred.


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The following comments are for "When We Are Together"
by Wicked Voodoo

Eh..
First general impression: Creed. Then, you got a bit more Creedish... Then a tad bit less.. Then a tad bit more(which evened off the first tad bit off).

( Posted by: Tyrant Monkey [Member] On: January 22, 2002 )

cute!
hello this was very cute I'm a huge sap and I liked it!!

( Posted by: strawberryshortcake [Member] On: April 27, 2002 )





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