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Couldn't believe such an unpleasant surprise,
I peered through my window,tears in my eyes,
Bittersweet pill of irony in a complex surprise,
The day I saw flighted black crows and butterflies.

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John K Brewster
"Willows whiten, aspens quiver, little breezes dusk and shiver"- Lord Tennyson


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