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Conquest jealousy
and possession, then there is
the pleasant surprise.





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This came about via my journal which has a neat little feature that finds accidental haiku in your written text. There were a couple I thought worth sharing.

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"I'm not an artist - I'm a f*%king work of art!"
- Marilyn Manson: (S)aint

"Hold the 'S' because I am an 'aint'"
- Marilyn Manson: (S)aint

"If at first you don't succeed, you're about average... I HATE being average."
- Adam Best

"One must either be a work of art, or wear one."
- Oscar Wilde





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The following comments are for "Freedom"
by De`esse

freedom
What does this all mean? like, what's
the story behind your Haiku?
What does conquest,jealousy and possession
have to do with freedom?

Is this the pleasant surprise thang from
the above words? conquest, jealousy and
possession? Freedom???

I'm just learning.
Thanks for the read..Raejon.

( Posted by: Raejon [Member] On: April 16, 2004 )

the lack of
the lack of.... in the lack of all those things there is freedom... as it was a non deliberate wording, just pure happenchance from my livejournal its probably not overly clear in stating this. I just thought it was rather cute the way certain groupings happened ^_^

( Posted by: De`esse [Member] On: April 17, 2004 )

ohhhhhh
Well then, I totally agree with the lack of
those things in freedom.

Best wishes...Mouse. Writingforums.com.

( Posted by: raejon [Member] On: April 17, 2004 )





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