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You want me happy, thatís okay
You give me life, then take it away
Iím not someone to pushed around
Beaten, lost, and never found
An image of you reborn in your child?
When will you learn I am not you?
I may look like you, but I am nothing like you.
I actually give a damn whether people live or die
You think you are bitchy, will so am I.
You always want me to be something Iím not
Someone false or skinny or hot.
An image of you reborn in your child?
When will you learn I am not you?
I may look like you, but I am nothing like you.
Love is not very hard to give, if you try it I may live.
Why do you find the need to lie?
Do you like it when I cry?
An image of you reborn in your child?
When will you learn I am not you?
I may look like you, but I am nothing like you.



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The following comments are for "Image Reborn"
by Gami

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I liked this poem,it's good but i didn't really like reading the same lines( An image of you reborn in your child?When will you learn I am not you?I may look like you, but I am nothing like you.)over and over again but that is just my opinion.I really liked the line(you give me life,then take it away)it should be a wakeup call for all mothers :).Look forward to more :))
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~AnGeL~

( Posted by: AnGeL [Member] On: April 7, 2004 )

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it was accually written to be a song thats why there is so mush repetition.

( Posted by: Gami [Member] On: April 13, 2004 )





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