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I think I love him but who knows?
I see him as a dark rose
tempting yet he harms.
He is in love with some ugly whore
but he just can't see her to the core.
Maybe I am wrong but who is to judge
I just can't see her as he does.
Its time to give up,God knows I tried
but somehow he has me tied.
Why wont he see that i wannabe free?
Free from every tempting word,boy let me breathe
inhale and just leave.
Leave my fantaciese please!!

Guess whoes in love?No not me
Its just him and his buddy.
I was so caught up thinking 'bout him
that i couldn't see someone was in love with me.
I try to forget because I regret having a crush
and missing out on times I could of blushed.
Look at what I,ve been through,
bent over backwards just to be with you.

Now I am alone sitting at home,
his buddy warned me that this would be.
After all the frustration,pain and stress.
You just couldn't see the real me.
Well I guess it was just not meant to be,
Have a great life,I am so angry I cvould sream
yet it tears me up inside with pain.


Love is rewarding yet it leaves you in pain.


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