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I tend to be...
Misleading, every day in any way;
I tend to see...
Everything you never said that day.
I tend to lie...
To every person I talk to.
I tend to die...
Everytime I think of you.

Falling down and growing away,
Filling this frown with sudden dismay.
Take cheap shots, I'm falling still.
Leave me my thoughts, a powerless will!
Give into me!
Oh, unholy being.
Fall into you.
Imagine what I'm seeing!

I tend to think...
About the death of anything innocent.
I tend to drink...
And forget where the time went.
I tend to regret...
Absolutely nothing...that I do,
I tend to get...
Anything I want from you.

------
LoNe)(WoLf


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The following comments are for "Suicidal Tendancies"
by EndlessFear

nice.
This should be a poem. If you have this in music?
post it so I can listen to it.

Best wishes. Mouse..

( Posted by: raejon [Member] On: April 17, 2004 )





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