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Onslaught Of A Thousand Souls

When..we hear...the silence in the air...
Do you ever pray?
When..were done...can you say its all fair... Chorus
Do you see the world now?

How, can you...be so sure of things to come
And, why dont...you change?
A thousand notes, and a hundred cries First Verse
All the world has come to despise...
To expire...

All, ive thought...is nothing aboriginal...
How, ive sought, for something out of reach;
A time to climb, and a hope for speech... Second Verse
All the world has is simply to preach...
And expire...

Do you feel the sun hitting your...shoulders?
Do you have a light in the palm...of your hand?
Can you see my face glistening...with the makeup of life! Third Verse
Where did we all turn to the ground...
(Simply heard a sound)
Controversy of a world suffering from ADD
Yeah..weve come a long way...
Yeah..weve gone a long time...
Yeah..this is useless...
Yeah..this is pointless...


This is the first song ive written to music with a beat, if you know the notes of a bass u can ask me for the tab and ill show you so you have an idea of the rhythm. Its also the first song ive written for a friend who needed lyrics, i like it and i hope you all think its good too, thanks for all the support...for the bass tab part or just to talk with me my email is Gothik_shadows@hotmail.com

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LoNe)(WoLf


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The following comments are for "Onslaught Of A Thousand Souls"
by EndlessFear

cool.
Nice job for a first write.
Keep up the good work.

all's well. Mouse..

( Posted by: Raejon [Member] On: April 16, 2004 )





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