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mou ichido

Once you leave this place
You can never come back again
After this is finished and rewound
It will never sound as beautiful
As the way your voice sounded
The night you told me those words

The record that is my memory
Is filled with gaps and skips
But there are no alterations
Instead, it's just a re-examination
Of the things we said to each other
And the things we did with each other

Nothing will return us to those days
Because we're too grown up now
If we close our eyes for a moment
And you finally hold my hand
Maybe this dream I keep having
Can manifest itself somehow

Yet I refuse to go back
To those days with battered spirits
Everything was broken but inside
There was a kind of happiness
We can never come back
But we can always try again.


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