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Let me lead you,
Into the darkness
Where the sun refuses to shine...
We can lay in repose,
Softly and silently drift away
Amidst dreams and possibilities.
Resting, no words are needed.
Healing, share again the vivid river.
Pain upon pain, hope upon hope...
Eventually, to emerge again.

"I'm not an artist - I'm a f*%king work of art!"
- Marilyn Manson: (S)aint

"Hold the 'S' because I am an 'aint'"
- Marilyn Manson: (S)aint

"If at first you don't succeed, you're about average... I HATE being average."
- Adam Best

"One must either be a work of art, or wear one."
- Oscar Wilde

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The following comments are for "Cocoon"
by De`esse

How sweet you have made the words of sorrow seem.

( Posted by: Serendipity [Member] On: April 5, 2004 )

Thank you
Thank you for your words, they are greatly appreciated - I am flattered. At present, both you and Jess are two of my favourite authors to read of, and both of you have been kind enough to comment - Thank you.

( Posted by: De`esse [Member] On: April 7, 2004 )

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