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(I know theres typos and msn talk but dont btich about it ok! its habit!)
I know this girl, shes so depressed
She doesnt care how shes dressed
She doesnt even wipe away her tears anymore
She says "Theyll just come back" another tear pours
Shes tried suicide many times, it just wouldnt work
Shes slit her wrist jumped off of things all she recieves is hurt
Shes been to the hospital against her will
She told them "Im a fine girl, your the one thats ill!"
She gets pissed off when the therapist asks about her week
she will tell him "How would you feel if you were classified a freak?"
Shes tried all sorts of drugs ranging for herione to crack
Shes tried alcohol and still theres this gap
Shes dyed over her beautiful bright blonde hair
now its black, such a horrible black but she doesnt care
She says thats the color of her insides, seeping out her head
"Nobody gets outa this game called "life" alive any ways" she said
She has tattoos and peircings but her parents cant make her stop
There afraid they might hurt her, ever think she wants to be grounded? do you think she likes the cops?
She has intense anger problems, I dont know why shes so frigin mad
She yells at principles teachers, her mom and her dad
She takes these pills called zoloft that dont even do a thing
The doctors told her "6 - 8 months you'll be better" 7 months later i still got the sting
Her eyes will fill up with tear drops, making her dark heavy eyeliner a mess
when she looks in the mirror trying to fix it she wishes she could be put to rest
I know this girls every thought , every thought there will be
I am this girls closest friend and also enemy,
Shes crying right now wishing this darkness would just let her free
this girl that im talking about, I kno her so well because well, its me.


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The following comments are for "best friend and enemy"
by maestroe

Good job!
If this girl is you, then you should cheer up, because you have a great future writing stuff. I like this poem alot, and can relate, but always remember there is always a brighter day.
Good job!

( Posted by: LovesEssence [Member] On: April 6, 2004 )

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