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Everyone is dancing through this age
Slivering with themselves deep inside
Skin deep hoping to forgo the unimaginable
Of no belonging, whatever that means.
Each of us dancing in the rain
Splashed by other splashes everyday
Not to mention the storms that torture
The tortured while they sleep.
Angels destined for the scrap heap when consciousness kicks in.
Halos dishevelled when all we look for is a decent two step,
Perhaps divinity should have mulled this over
Before moulding such delicate toes.
Once the day breaks sun rays kick reality into the next garden.
Neighbours are so unalike, itís but his adorable irony to
Spoon feed me trite as I launder my washing.
Peering over the hedge distain written in lipstick.
Hypocrisy acquires me an inner piece.
Affords the intelligent a quiet laugh.
Letís laugh, letís scream, you and me under the duvet where no-one will see.
Sunlight shines over all these fears
Unwanted illumination of the heart and soul.
When conscious clarity prevails.


------
C.lynagh


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The following comments are for "Dancing"
by C.Lynagh

I like your honesty..
Thanks a lot Jess, I value your opinion a great deal. I think you give straight up reviews, having read quite a few your comments and agreeing with most, it is complement to get such positive feedback.
I know I can write some trash but I kinda of fancy this one. (I can be my worst critic as I'm sure we all can) :)

( Posted by: C.Lynagh [Member] On: April 6, 2004 )

Thanks
Thanks again claire I'm glad you like.
C

( Posted by: C.Lynagh [Member] On: April 7, 2004 )





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