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What have I done?
What ever am I suppose to do?
Why do you have to snatch it away
The only thing I have left
The only happiness I have left
The only one whom will be my love

What have you done?
What ever have I left for you to take?
Why do you so cold heartedly took
The only thing I bravely stood for
The only thing I stubbornly held onto
The only one i will hurt this badly

Have you not done enough?
Have you not enough entertainment?
Why do you time and time again
Cut my Heart and Soul
When they are the only things
You let me keep
Why do you blind my eyes
With those tears every night before bed

Have you given me anything?
Those eyes, heart and soul
Were once yours?
So you're blind.
So you're blind.


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The following comments are for "You"
by ^white

So me
I felt it. This is me! I believe poetry comes only from the heart, and this one touched mine.

( Posted by: Serendipity [Member] On: April 5, 2004 )

Really?!
Really?! Oh..it's so nice to know someone else felt this way too..:) Cheerz! But it sure isn't nice to feel that way, isn't it?

( Posted by: ^white [Member] On: April 5, 2004 )





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