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My stomach is filled with butterflies
Sweat drips from my hands
Nervous energy has invaded my body
The choice I have made to share myself
How do I feel at ease?
My body is ready, yet my mind has slipped into a trans of comatose emotions

Is this love? It couldn't be
Because as he lays on top of me
My heart is beating so fast
Pain I feel, hate I feel
Innocence is lost
This moment seems like forever

I can't think! Heavy breathing!
What exactly was my reason?
I should have waited for maturity
Because all I feel now is insecurity
Peer pressuring thoughts of someone loving me
How can I go back and change what I have just done?
I can't because there is only one first time


The following comments are for "FIRST TIME"
by queeniesand

thats a powerful poem. but in some cases it seems like the sentance is to long to fit, but it is still a really great poem:)
Keep your pen to the paper!

( Posted by: Maestroe [Member] On: April 8, 2004 )

Your heart is in the right place but your writing seems to have gotten away on you. This is always a danger when writing about something so close to home.

Rein it in a little bit and this could truly be something. Even as it is it isn't bad.

May you never thirst


( Posted by: Enforced Bliss [Member] On: April 8, 2004 )

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