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What is it about you that make me yearn for so much more? Is it the passion I see in your eyes or the way you tilt your head ever so slightly to the side?

You are a beautiful man inside and out. You are talented beyond belief, gifted since the age of five. I see something in you beyond all the glamour of the acting life. I see a passion for the art and you openly express it with your full heart. As I sit and stare at your picture in a magazine, I wonder if you had ever been in my position of being unheard of and unseen.

What a tragedy it would have been if a talented beautiful poetic artist like yourself would not had been discovered. Maybe life would have brought you my way and we could have been lovers.

I know what Iím saying is farfetched and it will never come true, but the knowledge of knowing poetry is not just a passion for me, but for you also too.

Iíve fallen in love with you and I know that Iím way out of your league, but I have to tell you; you need to know that youíre the man of my dreams.


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