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Your every word awakens me
The smile behind your eyes;
Beauty is all I see.
Yet, I am what your heart denies.

I want so much to comprehend,
Just to finally see
It hurts me deep within
To know theres something wrong with me.

I didnt know how great you were
How beautiful you could be
How can one person be so pure,
But still treat my heart so dejectedly?

Your every word awakens me
The smile behind your eyes;
I want so much to help you see,
And let my feelings die.



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