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Smiling at every last turn,
(Lessons your forced to learn)
What to expect, coming last?
(Everything...approaching so fast)

Watch here as I suffer pain,
Watch now. I am so plain!
See the blood drop off my face,
Bleeding here at my own pace.
Left to die, by my own kind,
One sole thought fills my mind,
The caused all my sores!
Then locked the doors!
I will escape...
And wreak my heavenly havoc!

Finding out about the world,
(I'm learning things today)
Hoping that no one survives!
(Coming for your lives)
Rising to my feet...
(An archangel left in defeat)
Wiping away the tears...
(Giving into your fears!)

You spat right at me,
(Hatred so easy to see)
And you dug my grave!
(Eulogy for one so brave)



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