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Paralyzed for life...
(You still aren't happy yet!)
Blood covered knife...
(Cause me more pain, angel!)
No self-esteem...
(It goes around and down the drain
For the team.
(Drowing deeper in your loveliness)
Walking another mile...
(Still you haven't killed me)
For a while...
(I'm so lost and alone)
How could you?
(Angry at this whole world)
I never knew...
(Who the f**k you were!)
Finally, I collapse,
(Why are you still laughing?)
Life in relapse,
(I hate you so much!)
I love you!
(Your face begins to melt)
Killed you too!
(I'll see you in hell)


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The following comments are for "Spinal Injury"
by EndlessFear

I don't know, but
It is pretty depressing stuff, like you say. Just keep writing; before long you will have more things to say, other things to say. An easy opposite would be humor, it simply being grief turned inside out. Good luck, bro.

( Posted by: brickhouse [Member] On: April 2, 2004 )

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