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A new feeling brought upon,
Fate, no thoughts, only brawn!
Asked myself the only question,
Why is there this isolation?
Colour changing in your eyes,
To end all of these lies.

Ignored in the final stage of everything,
It's funny what unwanted thoughts may bring...
Being rejected by the whole world,
My whole life has unfurled,
Before my own fu**ing eyes!
What's the difference?...if everyone else...
Dies.

Thought of differently...my decision,
Clarity shines throughout my vision.
Leaving me here...so blinded!
STuck to this city..binded...
Falling down in the end,
No help...from any friend.

Taken!
Away from!
This!
Bad day...

Running!
From unwanted!
Thought!
Leaving me numb...

Never!
Showing!
My heart!
Ever knowing...

Always!
Hiding!
Who I!
Really am!
Knowing nothing...

------
LoNe)(WoLf


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