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Sometimes I try to remember,
A long time ago, one december.
But now that it's gone,
Those memories are done.

I couldn't remember if I tried,
(All you did was say I lied)
Payback is such a bitch!
(But so were you)
At first I laughed when you cried,
(I laughed when you died)
Timelessness brings upon a switch.
(A brand new change...)

With a pain that burns through flesh,
I took advantage of your every fear!
The blood tasted so very fresh...
So did your very last tear...
And I would do it all again for you,
But I lost my thoughts of yesteryear!

In the end, I died even more,
(You locked your f**king door)
Maybe I didn't try hard enough...
(It's in the past now though)
But you didn't know what I had in store...
Getting through this was too rough!
(And it was never enough!!...For me...)


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The following comments are for "Thoughts Of Yesteryear"
by EndlessFear

Great lyrics. I like them a lot. I think you have talent but who am I to say that?

( Posted by: StainedGlassWindow [Member] On: April 3, 2004 )

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