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-Seeing all the happiness around me,
-Wanting to close in myself from all surroundings.

-I cant help but feel
-Something deep down I know isnt real.
-Knowing what you said was a lie
-Holding in everything,but choosing to cry
-I wonder where this will take us,
-This secret unfound love...

-Deep down I know,
-Something will happen and this hate will show
-Far beyond forgetting,
-The things you put me through didnt amount to anything.

-People change over time
-And should come to realize
-Love isnt as beautiful, as it is blind.


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Geeze Cheddar..I love this poem..YOU ARE ON MY TOP TEN LIST!!!

( Posted by: Button [Member] On: July 18, 2004 )





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