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Un etoile dans mon ciel,
Ces't la seul etoile dans mon ciel.
Et tous les jours et nuits...
Je regard a cette etoile.
J'adore cette etoile et je veut tellement.
Un jour je sais que je va apprendre de voler,
Et visiter mon etoile par-ce qu'elle...
Elle...est tous que quelqu'un veut.

My french is a little off tho sorry...

A star in my sky,
Its the only one in my sky.
And every day and every night.
I stare at this star.
I adore this star and want it alot.
One day i know ill learn to fly,
And ill visit my star because she... everything someone could need.

Ya..this is written for someone...she knows who she is.


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