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The forest is dark...there is nothing but the darkness...it is everywhere...i stummble on something...what is it?...somewhere in the distance i can hear someone scream...it is a woman...a house...there's a house ahead...im moving slowly...am i dreaming?...she screams louder...calling my name...mother?...i want to see what she wants...there is someone behind me...and he wants to hurt me...i feel lost...and at the same time...found...i enter the door...the smell of death...a feeling so intense...it is threatening me...wishing me dead...looking around...i am waiting...the house is cold...reaking of loneliness...it is here that they roam...i can see fire...it is drawing me nearer...wind creeps around me...like it is afraid...the fire engulfs me...holding tight...mother appears...she takes my hand...pulling me closer...whispering in my ear...then i remember where i was before the forest...in a bed...sleeping...i realized that it must be a dream...i was wrong...i could see myself...out the house's window...i was in bed...then my father entered...with a gun...he put it to my head...i turned from the window...afraid of what i would see...mother?where am i?...she smiled...suddenly i was alone...for she had no love...to give me...i sank to the floor...in tears...i knew then...this was no dream...nor a reality...that i was ready to face...i was dead...and this was my welcoming to hell...



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