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Foolish cheerful
daffodils
like a greasy diner
open all night.



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by cybele

though you've both trashed the daffodils
they still smile through your work.

Nice poems, both of them.


john

( Posted by: johnlibertus [Member] On: April 28, 2004 )

cheap and cheerful
Early bloomers, and kind of blousy and sad looking once they are past their prime. Then, the faded foliage sticks around, outdated rememberances, brittle and dull.

The waitresses at the diners, I mean.

Thanks, John.

( Posted by: cybele [Member] On: April 28, 2004 )





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