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Verse One (upbeat Waltz tempo C&W Male lead)
I suppose it shouldn't matter
What I did before I met you
But I've been looking through my heart and in my soul

There were times when I'd forgotten
how it was to be a good man and times
I didn't care but now I know

It takes a who's special
To make a man find his virtue
and with her love becomes the man he wants to be

You're that woman...always patient
understanding kind and gentle
The only woman who saw the good man in me

Verse Two
Since we met I've made some changes
that for years I wouldn't consider
and I look forward to the time we spend alone

Little things that I've noticed
things I thought didn't really matter
But as a good man things I should've known

Repeat Chorus

Verse Three
You know my dear...I wasn't looking
for true love or my virtue
But now I see so very clearly how I've grown

And as a good man I have a question
Filled with love so everlasting
and by your side I feel is where I belong

(spoken) Will you marry me?
Repeat Chorus to end...

All of my songs are for sale.



The following comments are for "Good Man"
by brandy

cool song.
Howz it Brandy,
I liked this love song. Some of the lines
were a tad too long.
I also saw where you could have shortened

Brandy wrote::[quote]But I've been looking through my heart and in my soul[quote/]

In this line you could'ive had something
like. " I've been searching within my heart and soul" Just to keep the meter running on time.

I liked this song Brandy.
All the best...Mouse.

( Posted by: raejon [Member] On: April 16, 2004 )

Nashville Eh?
Boy I'm so glad to hear that someone else thinks I have talent. Of all the things I can do in life songwriting is my forte. That's for the vote of confidence. My parents thought I should move to Nashville and wait tables all my life hoping to get discovered. It could have happened but the odds aren't very good. But I have lots more songs to post. So I will continue. This one is new, I wrote it the same day I posted it.
Thanks for the great feedback.
Not to worry about the typing crisis Claire. I have them all the time. LOL

( Posted by: brandy [Member] On: April 18, 2004 )

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