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"What say ye?!" shrieked the aged woman
and I went "A foot arcs through and lands.
Though as the stepping-stone wobbles
a split decision which isn't mine reveals
the next step yonder."

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The following comments are for "Default"
by paxelius

Default; Amused
I rather like this. Funny, tight and brief.

Reminds me of that Simpson's episode "Lisa's Wedding" (remember the scarey squirrel card?)

It left me wanting more. I'll have to keep an eye out for your future entries.

( Posted by: hazelfaern [Member] On: April 1, 2004 )

Default: Comment

( Posted by: SubwayJoe [Member] On: April 1, 2004 )

Thanks for comments
hazelfaern: Glad you're amused, I downloaded that episode to check out the 'squirrel card' - Funny where faith pulls us.

( Posted by: paxelius [Member] On: June 25, 2004 )

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