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You embroider in silk liquid tissue of our lies,
I created the pattern for it and I feel no sorrow.
Let it be our most remarkable, beautiful slice
we present to the world... and the last one I'm ready to show.

Let it mirror the nights in their color and shape of the morning,
let it glow with days and their trace in the watery sky...
This will be - one of those forgettable precious moments
we imprint on the future - divided - on yours and on mine.


Sua sponte,

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by City

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I really like the metaphors you s(tr)ew through your work. Ecxellent, terrific, indeed.

( Posted by: hazelfaern [Member] On: April 3, 2004 )

gone with the metaphors
thank you for your comments!

( Posted by: City [Member] On: April 3, 2004 )

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