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Love lives beyond the grave
the whisper of a kiss brushes her cheek
as she sleeps deeply
sadly she never knows

Kacee Huggs

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The following comments are for "Spirit Kiss"
by Nitz Kitty

Loads of sadnes are packed into this short write. Love does carry on in the living, put is mixed with pain.

( Posted by: jaycee [Member] On: April 2, 2004 )

jacee and Pen
Thanks for your comments...To tell you the truth...I have no idea where this came it does not apply to me...things just run through my head...I guess I'm just a romantic at heart.

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: April 3, 2004 )

thats so true kitty, and like penelope said i too admire how much emotion is packed with in those few lines.

( Posted by: abi [Member] On: April 3, 2004 )

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