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In a dark an empty room sat a coat and slippers.
In reality we canít hear what a coat and slippers would say to each other, but this, my dear readers is a story.
So lets use our imaginations.
What colour is the coat?
What colour are the slippers?
What would a coat sound like?
What would slippers sound like?
Do they watch as you have sex?
Do they watch you cheating on your partner?

Ok, you've got your imaginations working, lets do some more.
What does the room they sit in look like?
Is it a big room, which person would live in this room?
Is it a man or a woman?
What kind of life do they live?

Ok, now we have the scene set, lets start the story.
"Slippers" whispered coat "are you awake?".
"Fuck off" scowled slippers "I donít exist".
Just then the door slid open, and the owner of the room came in.
Coat watched as the person hung a rope over the banister, stood on a chair, put the rope around their nervous neck and jumped.
"Jesus!" screamed coat "Jesus no!".

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