The following comments are for "Heaven Opens" by hazelfaern
I don't know
I don't know what to say about this poem, because it eludes my intelect. Ha.
Posted by: xinerama [Member] On: March 29, 2004
Xin If I May
Heaven Opens refers to a breaking rainstorm. I was trying to convey the giddy joy of cool precipitation which off-sets the muggy prelude of storm clouds growling overhead. I wanted to write this in a slightly abstract way which might also allude to other things -- a shift in an argument, any moment of sudden relief.
Posted by: hazelfaern [Member] On: March 29, 2004
hazel, I just love a good thunderstorm...I don't get many where I live now, so this haiku brought me great pleasure...good job