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The snoad,
has a snout,
and likes to rant and shout.
And child beware!
because, the snout, is about.
He has qwiver liver hair shoes,
skin and beard of old blues,
eye balls that watchs you'se,
as your livering about.
He eats little children from under eye-lid,
he slump on the hoover,
he sleeps with your mother,
he screws your gran,
and your dad,
he melts your toys,
beware you will one day see him in the mirror.


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