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always remember I love you
isn't that what you said?
yet here I am, crying
because you've left me for dead

always remember
there's a reason to life
yet here I am, dying
from all this pain, guilt, and strife

never forget
that you deserve the best
but Im here being broken
and you get the rest

You wiped all my tears
forgotten by years
and as fresh water trickles down my cheek
its you who's left be worn and weak

you warned me, watch out for the people
the people that use and abuse you
but now I've had my final warning
and its up to me to choose

to be through with you, or be used by you
to listen to your lies
to be trampled by your decieving ways
to have a new reason to cry

yet Im choosing this path of heartache
because my heart is drawn away
from the sensible reasoning in my head
and now I look the other way





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