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When I look into your eyes
I see something specieal inside.
Is this love or a dream?
I just can't seem to deside.
You came into my life so suddenly,
then the love I developed for you
came almost intantaneously.
When you look at me int that special way,
I'm so ecstatic with happiness and passion.
I forget all the words that I wanted to say.
Your so unblemished, perfect in my eyes.
Although I am fearful
of how we may part,
I know that
this is the way to start.


------
Renea Roeder


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The following comments are for "your eyes"
by flygirl1204

Your Eyes
Not bad, but SpellCheck and a different layout could have added more effect here

( Posted by: thebeast [Member] On: March 31, 2004 )

feedback
good form. I like it. just spell check.

( Posted by: WavePuncher [Member] On: May 23, 2004 )

Is this the Same renea from Grand Prarie
I'm hoping that this is the same renea I knew back in high school. It's Jay if you remember me please call me at 817-907-8538 or write to me at shesinlouisiana@yahoo.com please if this isn't i'm sorry to have bothered you

( Posted by: Searching4her [Member] On: September 8, 2005 )





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