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Everyone told me
The world goes round
Round and round and round
Thatís what life's all about

Old man told me
The world goes round
Round and round and round
Till you're six feet underground

Round and round and round
Till I fall down to the ground
Round and round and round
Keep falling to the ground

I would say
This world goes round
Round and round and round
Keeps fucking you around



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The following comments are for "Round and round"
by DeadPoet1001

round and round
a dizzying read

( Posted by: savaf [Member] On: April 1, 2004 )

ummm...:)
Round and round and they all fall down eh? At first I though you were making a kids poem then the ending suprised me.

( Posted by: LovesEssence [Member] On: April 1, 2004 )





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