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Qwig sat looking at the broken moons of handlehead.
"by god, those moons are crap" he said.
He sat in the eternal feilds of gabbermath, in the ancient times the giant slug faces traveled there to escape the flames of heed, as a reslut the land is forever lust but devil dicks must feed every month, and a devil deed walked out and talked to Qwig.
"Ok you know the drill, you have to get eatten by me, or this land will become dark and forgotten".
Qwig stood up and killed the Devil.
the land became dark and forgotten.
"I forgot that this land was so dark" said qwig.
"oh fuck of" said an orc "youve runined it for everybody... you cunt"


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The following comments are for "Qwig, and the orc"
by deathtowords

funny
I thought it was short and to the point, and oh so funny!

( Posted by: brickhouse [Member] On: March 28, 2004 )

Worst word in the English language
My word, you need your mouth washed out with soap after that one deathtowards. Its an interesting piece despite all the missspelled words. Perhaps you could be a little more inventive with the word 'reslut'. I think you could achieve a better impact with it. I admire the fact that you brought that very offensive 'c' word out in the open for people to decry. Liked it.

( Posted by: Emlyn [Member] On: April 1, 2004 )

thank you all
thanks you for your lovely comments.
As for my speeling, its fine.
ok, maybe I cant spell.
Its just I write these things down as they come.
anyway thanks guys.

( Posted by: deathtowords [Member] On: April 1, 2004 )

Genius
You are a genius.

( Posted by: dQ [Member] On: May 20, 2004 )

I hate it!
...Just being honest. I used that language when I was a child who didn't know better: but I outgrew it! Can't you find better verbals, as a writer? I find it crass and demeaning... to all humanity... but then I understand where you're coming from because of your signature: Death is in control, for one of the laws of the spirit of Man says: "out of the abundance of the heart the mouth speaks."

( Posted by: MaxiiJ [Member] On: May 20, 2004 )





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