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searching through
a misty dream
I look around
and escape from me

out of my head
and into your heart
cleared from faded destinations
with a whole new start

a single tear drop
would stop this storm
a simple " I'm sorry"
would be forgiveness born

but a girl too stubborn
and ignorant to admit
she's stolen your heart
and broken it

is not deserving
of a sweet-tempered guy
who's fallen in love
with a girl whose head is in the sky

because his heart is worth
so much more
than to be shattered and scattered
like glass on the floor

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