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Love's Sweet
Love's blind
a world no one can describe
Love sometimes hurt and makes you cry
but once your in love that love will never died
Love is like a child born for the first time
you heard its in the air
Love is a merry-go-round that won't never end
Love is like sunshine on cloudy days which effects us internal and externally
yet love is like an hour glass that ages with time
Love is blessful in many ways and comes once in a life time
Love is special to someone from the heart as the candle shines
Love can also be color blind and confronted before the eyes.

by Feon Davis
Copyright 1999-2004

POEM FROM ROMANTIC POETRY BOOK:"LOVE IN COLOR"

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The following comments are for "Love And So On"
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Hour Glass*
Heart and Soul;

Nice poem you have here, I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for posting it.

Blessings,

{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: March 29, 2004 )

hour glass
this is really pretty wished I had wrote it!

( Posted by: CoCo [Member] On: April 1, 2004 )





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