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As A child I knew no better.
I thought responsibility meant being home in
time for dinner.
As A child being a good friend meant sharing my
chocolate.
As A child being a great dancer meant moving to
the sound of the music, hands flaring, eyes
closed and laughter uncontrolled.
As A child I believed being loved meant hugs
and kisses, nothing complicated.
As A child my dad was my hero, stronger than
anyone on earth.
As A child my mom was protector of all things,
bad dreams, cut knees, hurt feelings.
As A child I dreamt that my knight and shining
armor would be strong, steadfast, always interested and always willing.
Now as A woman I know nothing better than to want
to be a child again...

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I am on a journey. Looking for Me. Everyday I get a little closer. The more time goes by the more I realize I'm always changing. This journey could take forever... Renae L. Soler


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The following comments are for "As A Child..."
by nae411

nice write
a bit melancholy but a good write full of wishfulness...life was much easier as a child..but to go through the growing again..no thanks.

( Posted by: jaycee [Member] On: March 28, 2004 )

As A Child
Oh how it would be so wonderful to be a child again, change a few things, live alittle longer perhaps. Wow. I like what you wrote, it was very nice. Keep writing... yourself. You are very talented. Best wishes to you.

-David

( Posted by: moonrising36109 [Member] On: March 28, 2004 )





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