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Devastation
is a delicate matter.
I need to improve my manners
And ask you very politely
- What do you actually mean?

Restoration
Renewal, resumption
Can reading a dictionary help us
to solve the problem?

Contextual feelings
Replaceable set of emotions
How convenient, even if not
Truly believed
Thus you will not even notice
My French leave


------
Sua sponte,
O.


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The following comments are for "- good manners -"
by City

Manners of Course
_City;

Fabulous poem. I enjoyed the read. "Oh, what other language do you speak. Anyways, "Bonjour"(good morning)
Je suis des etats unis
(I'm from the United States)

Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: March 25, 2004 )

merci :)
JEANNIE45, Penelope
Thank you, ladies!

Merci Jeannie. Je suis Russe, j'habite a Dallas, TX (par intérim) :))

I'm glad you liked it.. Will post more. One at a time...

( Posted by: City [Member] On: March 29, 2004 )





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