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high heels...
short skirt...
beautiful...

whore deels...
boys flirt...
disgraceful...

to much make up...
to little clothes...
to many boys...

no money...
no friends...
no more tears to cry...

she
lying there
with open eyes
hoping to die

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the nice girl_tabita_(tha~belgium~chick)


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by tabita

Sweet
Short and a bitter sweet.

( Posted by: HedErotic_String [Member] On: March 26, 2004 )





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