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I know you are hurting,
I know you are in pain,
I know you want to be alone,
I know you may feel ashamed.

But I want you to realize,
And I need for you to see,
That I will be here when you are ready,
That you have a friend in me.

Come to me,
When you need to cry,
Share with me,
All the hurt inside.

You know who you are.
You know what I mean.

I wrote this to you because I want you to understand,
That everything you need me to be,
I will be for you, my friend in need.

Anything I can do,
To ease your burden and worry,
I will do with a gentle heart.

Forgive me for being angry with you in the beginning, for I've now come to grips with what was said.

I'm sorry if I caused you to hurt you even more. I was wrong.

I won't let you go.
I won't let you down.
This is my plea to you.

You know who you are.

-=- IceQueen -=-

Dont think. Feel. Its like a finger pointed at the moon. Do not concentrate on the finger, or you will miss all that heavenly glory. Bruce Lee, Enter the Dragon.

-=- IceQueen -=-

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The following comments are for "The Plea"
by IceQueen

another job well done, ice queen. you need to start writing music! :o) ~v

( Posted by: Veruca Salt [Member] On: January 12, 2002 )

If only!
*sigh* Veruca, I'd love to be gifted enough to write music, but unfortunatly, I just don't hear anything musical in my head when I write this stuff. I wish to God I did.

This wasn't actually meant to be a poem, but a heartfelt plea to a friend, who's going through some rough times. I know they read the postings on this site fairly regularly, so I wanted to let them know that I will be there for them, when and if they need me to be.

And hey, if it turned out to be a sort-of-poem.........bonus! Hehehee!

Thanks for the terrific rating (I didn't think there was much there to rate, but hey, I'm not complaining!) I really liked your stuff too, and intend on posting some comments in the near future.

Peace, love, empathy

-=- IceQueen -=-

( Posted by: IceQueen [Member] On: January 12, 2002 )

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