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I live in shadows
I live in darkness
I live in anger
I live in hate
I live in sadness
I live in sorrow
I live in pain
I live in vain
I feel empty
Deep inside me
I feel numb
I feel dumb
I live in misery
I live in despair
I live alone
I live in desolation
I Donít know why
I keep on going
With this crap called life

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The following comments are for "Pain"
by DeadPoet1001

Thanks for the comment
Thank you for the comment, as you see I have started to write poems again and that's one of the firt ones in after 4 years of not writing...I have gone rusty I guess.

( Posted by: DeadPoet1001 [Member] On: March 26, 2004 )

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