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Word of pleasure
Kisses of truth
Wrap around me
Remind me of you.

Times together
The times you were true
Faithmul moments
Memories of you

So tell me why it all must end
Why good times seem no more
When love fades
And sorrow darkens your door.

When the one wo holds your heart
Shuts out the memories
Forgets the moments
And moves on

The tears that seem to come
One upon the other
With the pain that seem to last
The never dies or flickers

When memories taunt the soul
And reminders float about
Places we use to go
People who use to know

Secrets hidden, now told
Cries fill the air
Tears drip like mist from my soul

I'll move on
Pay the pain with my soul
Cry the last of my tears
Weld my heart together again.

heartofapoet A,K.A. Jennifer Eller

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The following comments are for "Old Times"
by heartofapoet

pPower in the Words...

This is awesome! I love it tremendously.


( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: March 25, 2004 )

hey girl, i'm proud of you. this poem rocks! keep it flowing.

( Posted by: iamlolophobic [Member] On: April 13, 2004 )

wow this is so cool never stop writibng .................

( Posted by: LamemansTerms [Member] On: June 23, 2005 )

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