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Dedicated to Laurel Bennett

Lift up the lid
Take a quick peek with in
Tell me of what lies with in.

Did you see untold beauty?
Did you sense a love too great?
Did the light blind your eyes
Does your heart reflect its light?

Has the unknown whispered to you?
Has it told youa perfect ending
To this life wihtout bliss?
Has it pointed out the darkness?
And pointed out the life?

Has it made an impact?
Did it touch your heart?
This unknown thing
In a worn out box

Lift up the lid
Snap back the latch
Lets peek in
See what stirs with in

Memories of you
And memories of me
A world form the past
A gate to the future

Worn out past down
Down from the years
The box holds a secret
Story of one so dear

The wood of the cross
And the blood of the Christ
Make up the old rugged box
Our names engraved
A memory of the life he gave.

------
heartofapoet A,K.A. Jennifer Eller


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by heartofapoet

Dedication~
Heartofapoet;

This is beautifully written. I can see your light shining above all. Giving dedication to your friend, and loving your friend, your words, as much as your actions, speaks loud. From the 1st stanza to the last stanza, I loved every written word. God bless you abundantly. Not just a poem, a dedication to your beloved friend.
I enjoyed this poem very, very much.


Blessings,

{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: March 24, 2004 )

Untitled
This is an blessing from the darkness to the LIGTH of God to be in his loving arms of armor.

cause all victory is Of Christ.

God bless and I would love to know your web site where you publish your book i am basicly looking forward in God's time to purchase few book of christian Author's of poetry and I am praying for that day to come soon i am very much overjoyed for more books in the future of Amerak.com as well. God bless

( Posted by: heart and soul [Member] On: March 24, 2004 )

i feel so special
thanks girl. you are such a great person. your poems are the best!!! Laurel

( Posted by: iamlolophobic [Member] On: April 13, 2004 )





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