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Untie your boots, unbutton jacket
and see that every single blink
Of miracle is brining lightness,
Is cleaning sky above the linked
- and may be married – isolations,
distracted, lost in thousand paths…
refresh yourself and loose your fingers
let music flow, let summer play

Sua sponte,

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The following comments are for "- through the spring -"
by City

Cleaning Sky
This is another great poem that I enjoyed. So together. Keep 'em comin'.


( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: March 26, 2004 )

I will :))
thanks, Jeannie
I will :) it's a challenge to show something to such an audience!

( Posted by: City [Member] On: March 30, 2004 )

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