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I Will (Be There With You)
March 22nd, 2004 - March 23rd, 2004

When you can't think of anything to say
When you're at a complete loss for words
When it's all been said and done before
When you find yourself at a dead end

When it's time you should head back
When you realize it's getting late
When there's only one thing on your mind
When there's no place that's like home

When you're alone in this world
When you think you're the only one
When no one else can see you
When no one will be your friend

When you need someone to talk to
When you need someone to listen
When you need someone to be there
When you need someone to understand

...i close my eyes in order to see...

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The following comments are for "I Will (Be There With You)"
by eyescovered


You have delivered another great poem that I enjoyed reading.


( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: March 25, 2004 )

I Will
This is a really neat piece. I enjoyed it!


( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: July 14, 2004 )

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