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Born when the world moved at a tranquil pace
Into a tribe of the human race
In the time of the great winter snow
That was many many moons ago
He grew to become a strong and true brave
As his father taught him the ways
Learning to hunt with stealth
An give thanks to the land
For it is the ways of the Indian man
Then his universe began to change
As the Bison's slowly vanished from the plains
And the Indians way of life was no more
For many moons and many times they went to war
He fought fearlessly at the Little Big Horn
Beside his brothers of the nations
Then many moons later...he was asked to go...
Across the ocean...with a wild west show
He perished in a strange and distant land
To which the world calls England
And many more moons had to pass
Before his spirit again came
Back to the land of his ancestors
Lone Wolf was his name





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The following comments are for "The Legend"
by lynlin

over?
This one was too soon over. Your imagery and timing is great in this write. I could have read much more of Lone Wolf's story.

( Posted by: jaycee [Member] On: April 2, 2004 )





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