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And the petals fell down
Like the tears on her face
The once colorful petals,now faded
The sparkle of joy gone frome her eye
The long thick stem now snapped in two
She no longer stands tall,but is frail and small
What was once tall and full of grace
Now torn and disregarded,an aging face
No longer full of life
Her energy is gone
A beautiful flower no more
Who was she?


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The following comments are for "Flowergirl"
by pebblesogden

Flowers*
Pebblesoqden;

I enjoyed the read. nice poem you got here.

Blessings,


{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: March 24, 2004 )

so very..
quiet and very sweet that this way puts an emotion by any person.

( Posted by: ryangilr0y [Member] On: June 8, 2005 )





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