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I try to be yours, but for my love there is no open doors. When I think of you I cry and over and over again I ask myself why? but now I am over you and my heart will pull throught
with or with out you.


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The following comments are for "I try"
by u wont understand

Trying too Hard
I liked this, it is short and simple. But the second line you have and (twice) remove one of them. I would write it this way--->>>I think of you and I cry over and over. Again,I ask myself why? ok, last line---->>>>>throught=through
Good read though.


( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: March 25, 2004 )

Dont try!!!!!

Don’t try!!
Abigail, read this quote:
“ Don’t find love, let love find you. That’s why it’s called “falling in love” because you don’t force yourself to fall, you just fall”
This message was sent to me via cellphone along time ago but I still keep it so far…
However, I don know if your writing came up to reflect a real experience? I hope not…
What I wanted to say is..don’t force yourself to fall…
And just like you said…[I am over you and my heart will pull through
with or with out you.] this is better..

Regards..[ and wishing to fall soon ; )]

( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: March 26, 2004 )

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